The classroom never ceased to become decent. Screaming good mornings, paper planes flying over my head, gossip, and talks about what the summer break was like. It got on my nerves.
I let out a long yawn that had been waiting since I had woken up. Ever notice that if you dont yawn when you wake up, you feel like crap until you do
? No? Alright, its just me then. Leisurely making my way to a random desk, I tossed my sling bag under the legs of the chair before seating myself. Most of the students were from the OW side, but I did catch a glimpse of a handful of humans. I wrinkled my nose in disgust. How dare we even allow these filthy creatures trespass on our territory!
I was so into my mental rant, I hadnt even noticed the hungover elf, Kairii, walk in. Her hair in its usual spiked up bun (think of a pineapple) and red tips. Her hair is spiky enough to impale a baby animal
, a picture of a chibi cow being stuck in the mass of my health teachers hair played across my mind. Poor baby heifer didnt stand a chance. Tsk tsk tsk.
Every now and then I dozed off, feeling my sleepless night get the better of me. Kairii screamed at Riyal (Gay faggot) and Drifter (Emo- girl-who-needs-to-get-a-life-but-I-got-along-with-her-anyway) for being to noisy. She should be the one to talk. Kairii was obsessed with my cousin, who was also the alpha, Suzuki Nakutsu, because shes the most well known Nakutsu in the history of our kind. I think Kairii herself was once a nurse but still needed more of an education so she settled with being a health teacher. Joy oh joy. Well, at least there are no tests, right?
Health Class was over like lick-a-dee split and everyone made a mad rush towards the door. Except for one of the humans and Pasht, who jogged up to my side with a look that screamed SOS. I already knew why, but some people feel better when they are asked what was wrong. So, you gonna tell me why your about to scream or do I have to wait till that happens? He looked in my direction and replied, Human blood
I smiled a bit, giving a light pat on the shoulder, Youll learn to live with it soon enough, Pasht. Pasht nodded in return and murmured a thanks before we stepped into Telescopiums history class only to find out we had assigned seats. For some reason, I have never been on Telescopiums good side, no matter what. We hated each others guts for reason we dont really care about. Assigned seats were just the beginning. Then his long ass lectures that take forever. Seriously, this guys </i>mouth</i> could make history!
Being the jackass Telescopium was, he seated me next to a human. A human of all things!! Why not Kuraike or, hell, even Riyal!? You are a fucked up guy, Telescopium
I scowled at him mentally, taking my seat next to the girl. She had chestnut hair with barely noticeable golden streaks and sparkly onyx eyes. Her notebook opened and ready to take down notes. She looks just like Teth- No
Shes nothing like Tetha
the thought of her smile brought pain to my black pit of a heart like gunshots to a deer. The class period dragged on while my mind kept flashing back to Tetha. Her deep onyx eyes boring into mine with happiness and laughter. Her auburn hair cascading past her shoulders when she spun around to face me. Her smile
That smile was one Ill never forget
She smiled only for me. Only for me.
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I DID NOT WRITE THIS ONE EITHER. It was written by my good friend Lyotvolk303. enjoy.
hmm. This was very well done. FOr a critique though I would like it with hints about Ryotas actual being to be a bit more subtle. He seems to be explaining everything out about himself. But thats a minor thing and isnt even an issue. Very well done.
i didn't write this. Lyotvolk303 did.
Yeah I know that. But I cant comment to her exactly. So im just commenting on the Deviant.
she's the deviant. you are commenting on the deviation.
Well yes. I am commenting on the Devation because I am critiqueing the deviation.
Um, Matt? Not trying to be overly rude but as an author I have to say that it's 1st person POV. Of course he'd explain about himself.
No what im trying to say is he is making it a bit obvious. Like for example. When he said something about his black heart or something along those lines. It just seems he is going out of his way to say all of this information about himself at one time. I mean if I was writing a journal or something I wouldnt go through every aspect of myself.
Well, thats you. Ryota isn't speaking to US he's speaking to Tetha. Someone who he can speak to. Like he knows who he is around her.
Plus, he knows that he's cruel.
Plus, he knows that he's cruel.
I was more under the impression that this is more of a journal type of thing. And in a journal you are not speaking to anyone in particular. You are more speaking to yourself in that case. And yes he knows he is cruel. And that is exactly my point. If you are making a journal and you already know you are cruel then you wont bother to say it. Its like telling yourself that you are cruel at loud. Its already known. So why say it again?
interesting, Ryota feeling the pain of a long lost love?
you know it. poor guy...
and just when i thought i had this guy figured out, here he goes with more events in his mysterious past.
MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! There is more! No, less! You'll never figure him out, NEVEH!!! MUAHHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAAHAHA!!!
lol don't blame me! blame Lyotvolk303!!!
lol... no dude.
Omfg, don't cry! Its not the end...Yet. You'll be loved....one day! I'm not getting anywhere with this Xd