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The classroom never ceased to become decent. Screaming good mornings, paper planes flying over my head, gossip, and talks about what the summer break was like. It got on my nerves.
     I let out a long yawn that had been waiting since I had woken up. Ever notice that if you don’t yawn when you wake up, you feel like crap until you do…? No? Alright, it’s just me then. Leisurely making my way to a random desk, I tossed my sling bag under the legs of the chair before seating myself. Most of the students were from the OW side, but I did catch a glimpse of a handful of humans. I wrinkled my nose in disgust. How dare we even allow these filthy creatures trespass on our territory!  
    I was so into my mental rant, I hadn’t even noticed the hungover elf, Kairii, walk in. Her hair in its usual spiked up bun (think of a pineapple) and red tips. ‘Her hair is spiky enough to impale a baby animal…,’ a picture of a chibi cow being stuck in the mass of my health teacher’s hair played across my mind. Poor baby heifer didn’t stand a chance. Tsk tsk tsk.
    
    Every now and then I dozed off, feeling my sleepless night get the better of me. Kairii screamed at Riyal (Gay faggot) and Drifter (Emo- girl-who-needs-to-get-a-life-but-I-got-along-with-her-anyway) for being to noisy. She should be the one to talk. Kairii was obsessed with my cousin, who was also the alpha, Suzuki Nakutsu, because she’s the most well known Nakutsu in the history of our kind. I think Kairii herself was once a nurse but still needed more of an education so she settled with being a health teacher. Joy oh joy. Well, at least there are no tests, right?
    Health Class was over like lick-a-dee split and everyone made a mad rush towards the door. Except for one of the humans and Pasht, who jogged up to my side with a look that screamed SOS. I already knew why, but some people feel better when they are asked what was wrong. “So, you gonna tell me why your about to scream or do I have to wait till that happens?” He looked in my direction and replied, “Human blood…So much… So strong…” I smiled a bit, giving a light pat on the shoulder, “You’ll learn to live with it soon enough, Pasht.” Pasht nodded in return and murmured a “thanks” before we stepped into Telescopium’s history class only to find out we had assigned seats. For some reason, I have never been on Telescopium’s good side, no matter what. We hated each other’s guts for reason we don’t really care about. Assigned seats were just the beginning. Then his long ass lectures that take forever. Seriously, this guys </i>mouth</i> could make history!
    Being the jackass Telescopium was, he seated me next to a human. ’A human of all things!! Why not Kuraike or, hell, even Riyal!? You are a fucked up guy, Telescopium…’ I scowled at him mentally, taking my seat next to the girl. She had chestnut hair with barely noticeable golden streaks and sparkly onyx eyes. Her notebook opened and ready to take down notes. ’She looks just like Teth- No…She’s nothing like Tetha…’ the thought of her smile brought pain to my black pit of a heart like gunshots to a deer. The class period dragged on while my mind kept flashing back to Tetha. Her deep onyx eyes boring into mine with happiness and laughter. Her auburn hair cascading past her shoulders when she spun around to face me. Her smile…That smile was one I’ll never forget…She smiled only for me. Only for me.
I DID NOT WRITE THIS ONE EITHER. It was written by my good friend Lyotvolk303. enjoy.
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TheFatMan35 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2009
hmm. This was very well done. FOr a critique though I would like it with hints about Ryotas actual being to be a bit more subtle. He seems to be explaining everything out about himself. But thats a minor thing and isnt even an issue. Very well done.
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mikenrikukohaku Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2009
i didn't write this. Lyotvolk303 did.
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TheFatMan35 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2009
Yeah I know that. But I cant comment to her exactly. So im just commenting on the Deviant.
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mikenrikukohaku Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2009
she's the deviant. you are commenting on the deviation.
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TheFatMan35 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2009
Well yes. I am commenting on the Devation because I am critiqueing the deviation.
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mikenrikukohaku Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2009
then let Areku know. she's annoyed at you because you are saying he's telling everthing about himself but it is 1ST PERSON so that is WHAT IT"S SUPPOSED TO DO!!!!
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TheFatMan35 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2009
No thats now what I...*sighs* Whatever. You dont get what I mean.
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mikenrikukohaku Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2009
then explain that to her.
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LyotVolk303 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2009
Um, Matt? Not trying to be overly rude but as an author I have to say that it's 1st person POV. Of course he'd explain about himself.
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TheFatMan35 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2009
No what im trying to say is he is making it a bit obvious. Like for example. When he said something about his black heart or something along those lines. It just seems he is going out of his way to say all of this information about himself at one time. I mean if I was writing a journal or something I wouldnt go through every aspect of myself.
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LyotVolk303 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2009
Well, thats you. Ryota isn't speaking to US he's speaking to Tetha. Someone who he can speak to. Like he knows who he is around her.

Plus, he knows that he's cruel.
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TheFatMan35 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2009
I was more under the impression that this is more of a journal type of thing. And in a journal you are not speaking to anyone in particular. You are more speaking to yourself in that case. And yes he knows he is cruel. And that is exactly my point. If you are making a journal and you already know you are cruel then you wont bother to say it. Its like telling yourself that you are cruel at loud. Its already known. So why say it again?
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LyotVolk303 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2009
Not everyone knows. Trust me. He's writing to not only Tetha. And she never thought of him as cold hearted.

Ryota is trying to keep his image as "bad ass" so in his terms, it's self encouragement.
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AirTyler Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
interesting, Ryota feeling the pain of a long lost love?
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mikenrikukohaku Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009
you know it. poor guy...
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AirTyler Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
and just when i thought i had this guy figured out, here he goes with more events in his mysterious past.
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LyotVolk303 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2009
MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! There is more! No, less! You'll never figure him out, NEVEH!!! MUAHHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAAHAHA!!!
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AirTyler Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You shall see! I may already have figured him out and not told you but you won't know till it's too late. :iconvictorydanceplz:
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LyotVolk303 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2009
Touche! :iconlarryplz:
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mikenrikukohaku Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009
lol don't blame me! blame Lyotvolk303!!!
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LyotVolk303 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2009
THATS RIGHT! It was all meh! HAHAHA!
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AirTyler Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh i love it, Ryota is wonderfully developed and it's great.
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mikenrikukohaku Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009
good. you better!!!
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AirTyler Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hey hey relax i already like told you i like Ryota.
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mikenrikukohaku Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009
i know. g2g tty 2morrow.
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NicoighInyeshaSake Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009
must...resist...human...blood!
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mikenrikukohaku Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009
lol... no dude.
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NicoighInyeshaSake Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2009
Yah. Part vampire, remember?
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mikenrikukohaku Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2009
I know!
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NicoighInyeshaSake Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009
So, I must resist human blood.
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mikenrikukohaku Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009
... you are a freak.
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NicoighInyeshaSake Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009
Say it load, Say it proud.
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mikenrikukohaku Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009
loud, not load.
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LyotVolk303 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009
Omfg, don't cry! Its not the end...Yet. You'll be loved....one day! I'm not getting anywhere with this Xd
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mikenrikukohaku Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009
lol yeah! there is a light at the end of the tunnel!!! i hope...
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